NickName: Fay
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Error Type: Reference error
Error: When browsing the female hair section in the All category, when I try to set my options to display "16 items per page", the page refreshes and then supplies the following error: "ReferenceError: getHashString is not defined".
Link Address: http://www.peggyzone.com/Object.html?type=01_01_00
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Error Type: Spelling error
Error: Point three on the Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management: "If we scent any abnormal account activities", scent should be "sense".
Link Address: Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management
Error Type: Spelling error
Error: Point three on the Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management: "(Including but not limited: sharing your account with others", Including but not limited should be "including, but not limited to:".
Link Address: Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management
Error Type: Spelling error
Error: Point four on the Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management: "(Including but not limited: the Member Date, PeggyG) ", Including but not limited should be "including, but not limited to:".
Link Address: Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management
Error Type: Grammatical error
Error: Point five on the Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management: "(All items here are only for personal use. ,", the period after the word "use" should be removed, since you continue the sentence with a comma after that.
Link Address: Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management
Error Type: Grammatical/spelling error
Error: Point six on the Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management: "NOT allowed for commercial purpose, or NO publish, transmit, modify or upload in any circumstance or send to others publicly !"; I would suggest "Not for commercial purposes; nor are you allowed to publish, transmit, modify or upload any of our files under any circumstances" or something along those lines, since "transmit" already means sending others files (whether that be publicly or not); and the whole sentence runs better that way.
Link Address: Terms & Conditions of Website and Account Management
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Error Type: Grammatical error
Error: Point one on the Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone: "All items here are only for personal use. ,", again, the period after the word "use" should be removed, since you continue the sentence with a comma after that.
Link Address: Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone
Error Type: Grammatical/spelling error
Error: Point one on the Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone: "NOT allowed for commercial purpose, or NO publish, transmit, modify or upload in any circumstance or send to others publicly !"; again, I would suggest "Not for commercial purposes; nor are you allowed to publish, transmit, modify or upload any of our files under any circumstances" or something along those lines, since "transmit" already means sending others files (whether that be publicly or not); and the whole sentence runs better that way.
Link Address: Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone
Error Type: Grammatical error
Error: Point seven on the Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone: "However, NO items that have been modified can be published or communicated in any websites or forums.", you can't communicate items/meshes/Sims/houses - I think "sharing" would be a better word.
Link Address: Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone
Error Type: Grammatical error
Error: Point eight on the Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone: " Please do NOT quote any pictures or download URL of any creations on our website.", instead of "quote", I would suggest "copy", since that makes a bit more sense when applied to pictures. People are not allowed to copy any of PeggyZone's pictures. However, that doesn't really fit in with "the download URL", so all in all, I'm not really sure what you mean by that sentence; it causes confusion 
Link Address: Terms & Policy for downloading and using items from PeggyZone
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Error Type: Grammatical error
Error: The answer to question one from the FAQ of registration: "Not necessary. For more players to enjoy Peggyzone, download items in Free Member area without registration is provided by our website."; I would suggest something along the lines of "The items in the Free Member area can be downloaded without having to register".
Link Address: FAQ - FAQ of registration - question one
Error Type: Spelling error
Error: The benefits of a Super Member account: "Once you become a Super Member you'll get some PeggyG which can be exchanged with kinds of Items and Services in our G-Shop", the first letter of neither "Items" nor "Services" needs to be capitalised, so it's "items and services" instead.
Link Address: Member Services
There were some more, but my post is already long enough as it is  The site looks nice! <3 |
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